ext_168222 ([identity profile] tartaruga139.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lifeinthebox 2009-05-26 11:44 pm (UTC)

This was absolutely beautiful. I can't even tell you how much I loved it. Seriously. I feel like my brain is not working properly right now. This whole last part pretty much had me tearing up but it was so wonderfully written!

The way you made it so all five of them were still somehow connected was awesomely done. I also really liked the switchings between scenes, memories and present. I thought they all flowed really well. The scene of Jun with the scarf going into the memory of how he got it was one of my favourites.

And Aiba getting the heart seemed so appropriate. AAAAAH ♥♥♥
Hokay, I'ma stop now before I just keep babblingg more. XD


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