ext_184512 ([identity profile] saturnianlove.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lifeinthebox 2009-04-09 09:35 pm (UTC)

This was just great. I think your characterizations were just spot-on; I was laughing to myself at a lot of Kenta's actions thinking "of course. That's totally him." I've only seen one episode of Yoiko no Mikata, but I thought Taiyou-sensei was writeen well too! He's seem like an "idiot teacher" indeed xD

The flow of this was really great; and the interactions with Sakura and all were very nice touches. I agree with the first comment that this was easy to read! I was surprised that it was so long (initially I assumed it'd just be a "haha" type run-in or something) but I really enjoyed reading it to the end.

I'm just not good at this... homo stuff."
I liked this too xD Totally Kenta.

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